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Today I would like you to edit your final narrative. Please can you use a different coloured pen (preferably green) to edit and improve. Think about our success criteria and the vocabulary, and language that you have used, can you improve it?

Success Criteria:

To include key grammatical skills;

-ing fronted adverbials

-simile starters

-manipulate sentences for effect

-blend action and dialogue

-sentences with relative clauses and relative pronouns.


To write in third person